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Inspire Yourself to Inspire Your Story Characters

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Inspire Yourself to Inspire Your Story Characters. This is an Exercise. Go somewhere public. Sit down in a spot where you can take notes inconspicuously. Pick a person from the crowd whom you do not know personally. Do not overthink your choice. Trust the writerly instinct you surely possess that this person will be the right subject for this exercise.

Write Down Answers to the Questions Below. These are your observations and interpretations. Do not worry about the actual truth. Write fast. Free your imagination to fly while this complete stranger lifts you to the sky. Trust the storytelling magic you also surely possess. Enjoy the ride.

His Outward Physical Appearance. Study his face. His eyes,  his mouth, his other features.  How is he dressed? Describe his hair – its length, color, style. What do his clothes and hairdo suggest about his personality? What about him prompted him to make these particular choices? Take a guess.

Her Physical Actions. How does she move? Her walk.The way she holds and moves her limbs.  The way she turns her head. What distinctive mannerisms does she display? What distinctive mannerisms can you imagine her displaying? Spread your wings wider. Invent some tics, visible hints at her inner nature, that offer insights into who she might be.

His External Extraordinariness. What is this person’s most significant physical feature? The thing in his appearance, and the way he carries himself in the world, that other people are not likely to forget. Feel free to invent what may only exist in your mind’s eye. Inspire Yourself to Inspire Your Story Characters.

Her Story. Your imagination is in full flight now. What does she want most in life? Make this the most crucial and urgent need she has ever experienced. Why does she desire this thing so much?

His Inner Character.  Are the reasons for his needs and ardent desires admirable? Why are they admirable, or why are they not? Are his motivations logical? Do they make sense or not, and why? Are his needs mentally healthy, or are they deranged? How deranged is he? Again, you are imagining all of this for yourself on the fly. Do not clip your wings.

Her Fears.  What does she dread and why? Imagine that she is running away from something. What is she trying to escape, and why?  What, specifically, (events or persons) has  caused her to be so worried, or even afraid? How will she decide what to do? What will that decision be?

His Predicament and  Dilemma. What is at stake for him in this situation? What will happen to him if he fails to achieve what he desires and needs? What will happen to others he cares  about? Make these possible consequences dire.

Her Obstacles. What will get in the way of her achieving what she desires and needs? Why are these forces or people determined that she should not succeed? What in her history with them has set them so adamantly against her? Make these obstacles formidable.

 Your Experience. What is your emotional response to this person you have created, and why? What has it felt like for you to perform this  exercise – this process of character invention and inspiration? How do you feel now at its completion?

Your Work. Most important, how can you adapt this person – this character of your creation – to fit into your own writing work? Preferably into the story you are currently writing, or the story you would most like to write next.

Meanwhile, You have Soared. You have inspired yourself to ride a bolt of imagination lightning powered by your own creativity rocket fuel. The accelerant you surely carry within you always. Feel free to fire up and take off into the stratosphere with every story you write. Inspire Yourself to Inspire Your Story Characters.

Alice Orr – You Possess Storytelling Magic. Keep on Writing Whatever May Occur. https://www.aliceorrbooks.com.

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Alice has published 16 novels, 3 novellas and a memoir so far. She wrote her nonfiction book No More Rejections: 50 Secrets to Writing a Manuscript that Sells as a gift to the writers’ community she loves. Her novel – A Wrong Way Home – Riverton Road Romantic Suspense Series Book 1 – is a free gift for you HERE.

A Wrong Way Home

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Vanquish the Cartoonish Story Villain

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Vanquish the Cartoonish Story Villain. A strong villain character is crucial to a strong story. He gives your reader someone to hate which involves her emotionally in your story. She cares what happens to this character. She wants him to fail and that keeps the pages turning.

A Strong Villain Character Gives Your Story Hero Someone to Struggle Against. Their struggle sends the beating heart of your story into turmoil. Your villain, and the trouble he causes for your hero, make your story intense and dramatic. Their conflict has the power to electrify your narrative.

With so Much Story Weight to Carry, Your Villain Must be Formidable. Otherwise, your intelligent, active, resourceful hero will defeat him easily. Your story will be over too soon. When your hero-villain struggle is resolved, reader interest fades, and your narrative is finished.

Kickstart Your Hero-Villain Struggle – then Make that Struggle More Perilous. Introduce your hero’s trouble early, preferably on page one. Before too long, heighten the suspense by revealing your villain’s identity – but only to your readers. Show us how dangerous he is.

An Evil Force is on a Collision Course with Your Hero. You have made us care about your hero. We identify with her. She does not share our knowledge about her adversary. She knows she’s in serious trouble, perhaps mortal danger. But she does not know the source of that danger.

Your Hero may be Acquainted with her Adversary. She may even trust him. We long to scream out a warning as she unwittingly exposes herself to peril. The story hook digs deeper into us with every page. Meanwhile, we must be equally and realistically terrified by the villain’s motivations.

A Wise Storyteller Avoids The-Devil-Made-Him-Do-It Villains. This character type is a psychopath or sociopath. His sick psyche forces him to do wrong and create chaos. Like a rabid dog, he has no choice but to run a destructive path. As a storyteller, you have no choice but to Vanquish the Cartoonish Story Villain.

He is Scary but his Motivation Lacks Complexity. His predictable character provides no fascinating depths for your writerly imagination to explore. Plus, we have seen him too often. There are far too many like him in the real world, and in the world of novels too.

The Number of Human Monsters in Real Life Encourages Writers to Portray Them. But this villain is fictionally boring. We’ve read his story so often it has become hackneyed and repetitious. Any twist on his twistedness must be truly sensational to stand out among such a huge crowd. Very few do.

He Has No True Choice but to Behave as He Does. No thrilling investigation nor confession of his nuanced motives can credibly occur. He is mentally ill. He does evil because he is insane. That is the essence of him, which renders him two-dimensional and diminishes his story to cartoonishness.

What distinguishes a Truly Intriguing Villain from a Two-Dimensional Cartoon? The difference is that we understand, on a mentally engaging level, the reasons for this  person’s twisted behavior. We do not have to sympathize with him. We only need to comprehend him, and we do.

As Storyteller you must Conjure the Origin of this Character’s Twistedness. What concrete experiences led him to his evil actions? You must make these experiences believable. The more credible his motivations are, the more credible your villain character will be. And the more terrifying he is as well.

You Must Present this Character Objectively. Your storyteller role is not to judge or condemn your villain character. Your role is to give him resonant, three-dimensional life on the page. You must allow your reader to know him from the inside out. Which means you must tell your villain character’s story as he would tell it.

Here is the Secret to Imagining Yourself into a Twisted Character’s Soul. Every villain is the hero of his own story. He is convinced his actions are justified. In the world as he perceives it, he is doing what needs to be done. His motivations are clear, strong and believable. His motivations are also warped.

The Specifics of that Warp are Yours to Discover. Think as your villain thinks. Go deep into his darkness until he is illuminated to you. The result is the opposite of cartoonish. He lives on your pages with chilling authenticity. Your reader longs to turn away but cannot. What could be a more riveting story hook than that? Vanquish the Cartoonish Story Villain.

Alice Orr – https://www.aliceorrbooks.com.

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Alice has published 16 novels, 3 novellas and a memoir so far. She wrote her nonfiction book No More Rejections: 50 Secrets to Writing a Manuscript that Sells as a gift to the writers’ community. Her latest novel – A Time of Fear & Loving – Riverton Road Romantic Suspense Series Book 5 – is available HERE.

A Time of Fear & Loving

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Write Thru Crisis – Precious Life

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Write Thru Crisis – Precious Life. I had a dream last night. It was deep winter, though our real season now is the beginning of summer. My son and I were in Denver, at a layover of a flight from the east coast, where we now live, to Washington State, where we used to live.

The dream details were vivid, but the time wasn’t the present. My son was young, maybe ten years old, though he is in his fifties now. I wasn’t any particular age. I was simply his mother, responsible for the safety of his precious life, and my own, and our safety was in danger.

A snowstorm raged outside, and the forecast was possibly dire. For some reason, only comprehensible in a dream, we were scheduled to travel in a relatively small plane. There was an important reason for our trip, and my son was eager to reach our destination. Everyone, including the pilot, assured me we would probably be safe to fly.

I don’t know what I believe about dreams. I don’t usually remember them after I awake. I’ve had others, vivid like this one, but I haven’t written them down afterward. I definitely have not written them down and shared them on the internet, or anywhere else.

The difference now is that we’re at a choice-making time in our personal waking lives. My husband and I must decide if we’ll reopen our business. as New York City reopens amidst the Covid-19 crisis, after nearly four months of public work suspension.

What makes this a dramatic story is the high stakes that are involved. We are both well beyond the sixty-five-plus vulnerable age for Coronavirus, and I have an underlying health condition. I won’t go into specific detail, but the physical circumstances of the company we run together are risky. My husband would face this risk in person and possibly bring it home to me.

I awoke from my intense dream to a lovely morning. The sun shone bright outside. The kitchen was flooded with light and warmth, and birds chirped beyond the window. There could hardly be a more peaceful setting. Yet, conflict persisted within our personal situation.

In a truly dramatic story, opposing high-stakes forces are at work. In our story, we hadn’t planned to retire this early. It would be to our financial advantage not to, and financial advantage is crucial to us, like it is to almost everyone we know. Back in my dream, the snowstorm continued, and threatened lives that were precious to me. In real-life, the pandemic did the same.

Have you ever been in your own high-stake situation? Has your safety, and/or that of people you love been at risk? Was a critical choice required? Did a prophetic message appear, maybe a dream? Was your flashing red light simply instinctual, or in some other warning form?

I won’t keep you in suspense. In my dream, I decided we wouldn’t travel further. My son grumbled, but the kind pilot invited us to stay in her pleasant home so all was well. Similarly, my husband and I have decided to close our business and continue the precautions that have protected us so far.

Your dramatic life stories also deserve to be told. If you’ve answered yes to any of the questions I asked about your own experiences, and I suspect you have, I hope you will write them down. Maybe also consider passing them on to me, to be shared as I’ve shared my own. Either way, I hope you will Write Thru Crisis about you own Precious Life.

Alice Orr – www.aliceorrbooks.com.

Alice has spent most of her professional life in publishing, as book editor, literary agent, workshop leader, and author. She’s published 16 novels, 3 novellas, a memoir, and No More Rejections: 50 Secrets to Writing a Manuscript That Sells (revised version coming soon). Her current work in progress includes Hero in the Mirror: How to Write Your Best Story of You.

Read the story of another dramatic period of Alice’s precious life in her memoir Lifted to the Light: A Story of Struggle and Kindness. Available HERE.

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