It Takes Two to Tangle Your Story. This is true in real life and in fiction writing. Here’s the difference. In real life, we try to avoid tangles, difficulties, and conflicts. In fiction writing, the more struggle you conjure up, the stronger your story will be.

Your Main Character – Your Hero – Must Have Someone to Tangle With. This someone may be a pesky sidekick or a possible romantic partner or a probable enemy. Whatever their relationship, this other character exists, mainly, to intensify your hero’s story.

This Character Gives Your Hero Someone to Talk With. Your main character’s internal thoughts move into external dialog. Internal monologue often reads as static and slows the pace of your story. Dialogue looks more active on the page and usually reads as more active also.

This Dialogue Must Be Highly Interesting. You make this dialogue highly interesting by creating complex, fascinating contenders to match your complex, fascinating hero. These more secondary characters possess opinions and attitudes different from those of your main character.

Differences Create Story Conflict. Which varies in intensity depending on the relationship. An enemy may even pose a threat to your hero’s life. By contrast, lovers and sidekicks debate your hero, irritate her, openly conflict with her. The clash is heated, but seldom flares into violence.

The Conflicts Between Mutually Caring Characters are Often Only Variations in Attitude. But they force your hero to articulate her feelings and beliefs. This helps your reader know her better and empathize with her. Empathy is critical to hooking your reader into your story. Reader connects with Hero. Yet again – It Takes Two to Tangle Your Story.

Caring Characters may Differ Intrinsically from Your Hero. The lover or sidekick may have something major to learn in life, an internal struggle that might not be resolved in this story. Unlike your hero who ideally learns and grows in some important aspect of her life.

Contrast these Characters Extrinsically Too. Family and culture, life experience, social and economic status. Differences in circumstance provide potential fireworks in relationships, which may be sexual or not. Fireworks ignite reader interest, which serves your storytelling purpose.

In Fiction Too Much Harmony is Boring. In real life we want everyone to get along. In make-believe, your characters may like, or even love, each other. But if they get along too well for too long, the story drags, falls flat, and you lose reader interest. Make them struggle with each other.

Create Struggle Between Your Caring Characters – But the Struggle Must be Real. Strong stories require powerful drama. You, as author, must know what qualifies as legitimate drama. Character banter, however clever, lacks the power to be strong storytelling on its own.

Real Problems Between Characters Create Real Conflict. The bigger their problem grows, the more intensely the conflict escalates. Plunge your characters into hot water in the form of relationship trouble and turn up the temperature. Trouble is at the heart of strong storytelling.

Give Your Hero Strength to Stand Up for Herself and Others. She refuses to be passive. She acts on what she believes to be right, no matter how much trouble and conflict she may encounter. Consider including a romantic interest to intensify that trouble and conflict. Remember – It Takes Two to Tangle Your Story.

Give Her a Romantic Partner Strong Enough and Good Enough to be Worthy of Her. A relationship of equals has huge potential for dramatic tension. Power, drama, and intensity ignite your story of tangled relationships. Go ahead. Set fire to the page.

Alice Orr – https://www.aliceorrbooks.com.

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Alice has published 16 novels, 3 novellas and a memoir so far. She wrote her nonfiction book No More Rejections: 50 Secrets to Writing a Manuscript that Sells as a gift to the writers’ community. Her latest novel – A Time of Fear & Loving – Riverton Road Romantic Suspense Series Book 5 – is available HERE.

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