Inspire Yourself to Inspire Your Story Characters. This is an Exercise. Go somewhere public. Sit down in a spot where you can take notes inconspicuously. Pick a person from the crowd whom you do not know personally. Do not overthink your choice. Trust the writerly instinct you surely possess that this person will be the right subject for this exercise.
Write Down Answers to the Questions Below. These are your observations and interpretations. Do not worry about the actual truth. Write fast. Free your imagination to fly while this complete stranger lifts you to the sky. Trust the storytelling magic you also surely possess. Enjoy the ride.
His Outward Physical Appearance. Study his face. His eyes, his mouth, his other features. How is he dressed? Describe his hair – its length, color, style. What do his clothes and hairdo suggest about his personality? What about him prompted him to make these particular choices? Take a guess.
Her Physical Actions. How does she move? Her walk.The way she holds and moves her limbs. The way she turns her head. What distinctive mannerisms does she display? What distinctive mannerisms can you imagine her displaying? Spread your wings wider. Invent some tics, visible hints at her inner nature, that offer insights into who she might be.
His External Extraordinariness. What is this person’s most significant physical feature? The thing in his appearance, and the way he carries himself in the world, that other people are not likely to forget. Feel free to invent what may only exist in your mind’s eye. Inspire Yourself to Inspire Your Story Characters.
Her Story. Your imagination is in full flight now. What does she want most in life? Make this the most crucial and urgent need she has ever experienced. Why does she desire this thing so much?
His Inner Character. Are the reasons for his needs and ardent desires admirable? Why are they admirable, or why are they not? Are his motivations logical? Do they make sense or not, and why? Are his needs mentally healthy, or are they deranged? How deranged is he? Again, you are imagining all of this for yourself on the fly. Do not clip your wings.
Her Fears. What does she dread and why? Imagine that she is running away from something. What is she trying to escape, and why? What, specifically, (events or persons) has caused her to be so worried, or even afraid? How will she decide what to do? What will that decision be?
His Predicament and Dilemma. What is at stake for him in this situation? What will happen to him if he fails to achieve what he desires and needs? What will happen to others he cares about? Make these possible consequences dire.
Her Obstacles. What will get in the way of her achieving what she desires and needs? Why are these forces or people determined that she should not succeed? What in her history with them has set them so adamantly against her? Make these obstacles formidable.
Your Experience. What is your emotional response to this person you have created, and why? What has it felt like for you to perform this exercise – this process of character invention and inspiration? How do you feel now at its completion?
Your Work. Most important, how can you adapt this person – this character of your creation – to fit into your own writing work? Preferably into the story you are currently writing, or the story you would most like to write next.
Meanwhile, You have Soared. You have inspired yourself to ride a bolt of imagination lightning powered by your own creativity rocket fuel. The accelerant you surely carry within you always. Feel free to fire up and take off into the stratosphere with every story you write. Inspire Yourself to Inspire Your Story Characters.
Alice Orr – You Possess Storytelling Magic. Keep on Writing Whatever May Occur. https://www.aliceorrbooks.com.
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Great blog, Alice. I’m sharing it with my writers’ group.
Thanks for your insights and inspirations.
Hello Lisabet. It is wonderful to see you here. Welcome!! I am honored that you wish to share my post with your writers’ group. I was a bit hesitant to incorporate an exerise as a post, undertain of how writers would feel about that. Thank you for the reassurancee. I do believe that nothing is learned as well or deeply as by the practice of it. I also believe that characters are the beating, living heart of great storytelling. So here is a way to combine the practice with character creation. Plus it is fun and thus especially helpful when one has gone a bit stale or tired or is losing enthusiasm for her story in some way. Simply go out somewhere and let your imagination take wing. That guy at the table in the corner can inspire a secondary in a scene. The woman at the counter can add a treasure of depth to your main character. You might be able to tell that cafes are a favorite place of mine for character raw material. I hope the members of your group will feel the same, and add fertile venues of their own. Keep on Writing Whatever May Occur. Blessings. Alice
Dear Lisabet. You have commented on my blog posts in the past. I invite you to explore my most recent series. It is titled “Oh No I’m a Caregiver – Dementia – Our Cautionary Story.” These posts are of special significance to me. Dementia appears to be a reality destined to assault all of our lives in one way or another eventually. I believe that the story I have to tell – through my initial post and others yet to come at https://www.aliceorrbooks.com – has valuable insights to offer. For this reason, I hope you will read it and pass it on to others so that they might benefit from what I am learning and from those insights.
For example… My husband Jonathan, who has recently been diagnosed with dementia, is actually quite fine at this early stage. He is engaged in lots of cognitively powerful activities. He writes original memoir pieces that are very good and says this is the result of sitting in on so many of my writing workshops over the past forty-five years. He now finds more joy in writing than the drawing and music that were his usual creative pursuits in the past. This is good because, as you know, portraying characters and composing scenes require a deep level of focus and detail concentration which is very beneficial for him. He also loves jigsaw puzzling – the 1500-piece variety. Again much concentration is required plus he has fond memory associations of doing puzzles with his mom when he was a boy. He also reads a lot – challenging books, as well as his favorite New York Times articles. He does regular physical exercise and has also begun gardening at our church which has a large planted space in sore need of attention. Medically, he is taking a basic drug that has disappeared his brain fog for the timebeing. We also have excellent medical professionals on our team and on our side.
Dementia is not like the tv commercials portray it to be. Their purpose is to ramp up fear and sell very expensive, very dangerous drugs. There is a long, gradual period before extreme changes begin, and the aggressiveness these ads emphasize can often be mitigated with simple mood medications that are harmless and affordable.
Meanwhile, there is a real-life story to be told here of real-life experience. I hope you will read and share it. Dementia is a reality for many of us and, unfortunately, promises to be a reality for many more. Truth is our best armor against being cast into despair by the prospect. I hope to add a little to that sustaining truth. Dementia is one of the many ways all of us will evolve from this life into whatever may lay beyond. Passing on is our universal destiny. Some of those passages involve discomfort and unpleasantness. We can perhaps be a bit better prepared if we understand realistically what to expect.
That is what our story – Jonathan’s and mine – is meant to do. Help others – in an honest and caring fashion – to be prepared. Love and Blessings. Alice
Alice, Nice suggestions especially for those who have trouble casting their characters. Hope all is great with you. I’m working on book 50 something.
Hi Janet. Book #50!! WOW. Speaking of inspiration. Who could be better at providing that than you? Casting characters is your forte after all. You should be writing this post, and probably have written a version of it somewhere sometime. I agree that the exercise in this post can bear story-nourishing fruit for anyone who wants to add depth, color and reality to her characters. I also find it a pragmatic instrument when the isolation of the writing life has begun to take its toll in slowed productivity and creativity. The world of the book is in front of and inside of you. Now the world of what we call real life surrounds you. One feeds the other, and all of it feeds you. Plus, you can enjoy a latte as well. What’s not to like? Keep on Writing Whatever May Occur. Blessings. Alice
Dear Janet. You have commented on my blog posts in the past. I invite you to explore my most recent series. It is titled “Oh No I’m a Caregiver – Dementia – Our Cautionary Story.” These posts are of special significance to me. Dementia appears to be a reality destined to assault all of our lives in one way or another eventually. I believe that the story I have to tell – through my initial post and others yet to come at https://www.aliceorrbooks.com – has valuable insights to offer. For this reason, I hope you will read it and pass it on to others so that they might benefit from what I am learning and from those insights.
For example… My husband Jonathan, who has recently been diagnosed with dementia, is actually quite fine at this early stage. He is engaged in lots of cognitively powerful activities. He writes original memoir pieces that are very good and says this is the result of sitting in on so many of my writing workshops over the past forty-five years. He now finds more joy in writing than the drawing and music that were his usual creative pursuits in the past. This is good because, as you know, portraying characters and composing scenes require a deep level of focus and detail concentration which is very beneficial for him. He also loves jigsaw puzzling – the 1500-piece variety. Again much concentration is required plus he has fond memory associations of doing puzzles with his mom when he was a boy. He also reads a lot – challenging books, as well as his favorite New York Times articles. He does regular physical exercise and has also begun gardening at our church which has a large planted space in sore need of attention. Medically, he is taking a basic drug that has disappeared his brain fog for the timebeing. We also have excellent medical professionals on our team and on our side.
Dementia is not like the tv commercials portray it to be. Their purpose is to ramp up fear and sell very expensive, very dangerous drugs. There is a long, gradual period before extreme changes begin, and the aggressiveness these ads emphasize can often be mitigated with simple mood medications that are harmless and affordable.
Meanwhile, there is a real-life story to be told here of real-life experience. I hope you will read and share it. Dementia is a reality for many of us and, unfortunately, promises to be a reality for many more. Truth is our best armor against being cast into despair by the prospect. I hope to add a little to that sustaining truth. Dementia is one of the many ways all of us will evolve from this life into whatever may lay beyond. Passing on is our universal destiny. Some of those passages involve discomfort and unpleasantness. We can perhaps be a bit better prepared if we understand realistically what to expect.
That is what our story – Jonathan’s and mine – is meant to do. Help others – in an honest and caring fashion – to be prepared. Love and Blessings. Alice
This is an excellent exercise. People-watching is fun. Now it can be fun and also part of the work. Anything that can add a joyful element to writing and research is most welcome to me. Thank you!
Hi Kathleen. Yes. People watching is fun. Not only for observing and embroidering upon the outward appearance of a person, but for conjuring an entire life for her as well. In fact, I enjoy that extension of this exercise best of all. Starting with her backstory, which I make fraught with problems and complicated by intervening events until it becomes a wonder to behold that she has survived it all to be here now. Then something from that past of struggle and challenge – some particularly thorny incident – emerges into the present, preferably an incident or element or person she believes (and is relieved to believe) had exited her life forever. “The past is never dead. It’s not even past.” Faulkner said a mouthful there, especially to storytellers. And all of that from simply leaving the house and looking around. Wow!! Keep on Writing Whatever May Occur. Blessings. Alice P.S. None of this would be possible without you. The website, the blog, the posts – you are the godmother of it all. Thank you very much forever.
These questions fired my imagination. I’m already thinking of ways I can use them on a couple new characters I’m planning. Thank you!